Score: 4

"Hmm, it's a maybe..."

submission: stick fight!.!.!.!.!

date: June 9, 2008

Well, it was better than my first attempts at stick animation, a few years ago.

Still, it's not that I hate it and it completely sucks, I just don't know what benefit this will be to Newgrounds. There are several stickfight animations here, and many undeservedly passed judgement.

The animating is better than most first attempts I've seen, but it don't think it has the potential to be an original, stand-out animation on Newgrounds.

Keep trying, and don't quit like I did.

Score: 4

"Good animation, worn-out story."

submission: StarWars StickFight

date: June 12, 2007

Very good animating, I will say, everything worked very smoothly.

But this is just a really overtired and overused concept, stickmen with lightsabers, it is so unoriginal.

You have animating potential, but bring us a completely fresh and new idea, and you will stand out from the crowd.

Score: 10

"Fucking amazing"

submission: Vending Machines

date: April 20, 2006

That was just awesome man. It was just so unexpected.

What would have been good, is if another guy went to the machine and payed for a drink, but instead of a pepsi he gets a severed head!

Great flash man.

Score: 10

"Bugger me"

submission: Anger inside

date: April 3, 2008

That did sound very fucking angry man :D
What fueled it?

Excellent riffs, chunky tone.
Chunky and excellent, like extra chunky soup, but instead vicious metal.
The one little beef I have, is that the drums are too quiet - I'm guessing that you believe in the listener to feel the drums rather than hear them, but I'm a hearing guy :P

Very nice though, I really felt the anger in this track.

Score: 9

"Oh yes. Oh yes yes yes."

submission: A Desolate Place (short loop)

date: April 2, 2008

This is excellent, you got that tone, and them phrasing skills man.
The looping is spot on too, it feels like the intro to a song.

Nice stuff, you should have a shot at a full acoustic song at some point.

Score: 10

"HEAVYYY."

submission: Bring The Pain (Instrumental)

date: April 2, 2008

Dude, this stuff has got giant steel balls.
I would say this should have been on Sepultura's Roots or Chaos AD, but the production here is too good. You're really enjoying your POD x3 aren't you hahaha.

Wicked riffs, let me know when you can get some vocals on man :D